I want to use this in a story sometime. Saving it here:
(thinking about terrorists): “Aren’t you afriad?”
He snorted and said, “No.”
“Why not?”
“Fear isn’t one of the four stages of grief. Anger is.”
“What are you grieving?”
“The loss of my freedom,” he said, and looked blankly out the window.
I probably won’t use it exactly, but evokes a character for me. That’s part of my process, often. I have trouble defining a character without writing about them — or writing about characters without defining them. So it’s back and forth and a prayer that what I discover doesn’t contradict the story I want to tell.
Which also happens too often:)

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God, I love that. Can I quote you?
September 24, 2008 @ 6:32 pm
Fine with me, hon.
September 24, 2008 @ 6:34 pm
I have one snippet, from a mystery that I may never write.
Police detective: “Miss, you were the last one to see Mr. Davies alive. And him rejecting romantic advance like that, it gives you motive.”
He could see her freeze, motionless as she absorbed that. She had been looking at his partner until he spoke. Slowly, she turned her head to look at him.
Flatly, she replied, “Really? I would look very carefully at whoever told you that. Because I careful that we were alone in his office when I told him that. It was certainly long after hours. You know what they say, two people can keep a secret; if one of them is dead. He’s dead and I haven’t told anyone. So…how does this witness of yours know?”
October 3, 2008 @ 11:50 am
Apparently, I can’t type. *sigh*
October 8, 2008 @ 1:41 pm